Comments on: Bad 9-11 poetry: ‘Untitled’ and ‘Declared Tumble’ http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/ Eric D. Snider's blog. Fri, 10 Feb 2012 22:54:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: corned_beef http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/comment-page-1/#comment-5135 corned_beef Thu, 07 Dec 2006 22:12:54 +0000 http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/#comment-5135 "Thoughtful thought"--now those are words of beautiful beauty. “Thoughtful thought”–now those are words of beautiful beauty.

]]> By: Garrett http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/comment-page-1/#comment-54 Garrett Thu, 21 Sep 2006 22:22:16 +0000 http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/#comment-54 Meh. That first one wasn't GOOD, but it wasn't memorably bad. The second one is obvious: Mr. Faux has removed every other word of his masterpiece. Very avant-garde. Meh. That first one wasn’t GOOD, but it wasn’t memorably bad.

The second one is obvious: Mr. Faux has removed every other word of his masterpiece. Very avant-garde.

]]> By: Cameron http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/comment-page-1/#comment-28 Cameron Wed, 20 Sep 2006 23:46:51 +0000 http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/#comment-28 I don't know about the metal birds, but I'm pretty sure the bowels of flame were from those buffalo wings. I don’t know about the metal birds, but I’m pretty sure the bowels of flame were from those buffalo wings.

]]> By: pizzatheface http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/comment-page-1/#comment-26 pizzatheface Wed, 20 Sep 2006 21:09:46 +0000 http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/#comment-26 "Metal birds with bowels of flame". Wow. Metaphorical. “Metal birds with bowels of flame”. Wow. Metaphorical.

]]> By: BeeDub http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/comment-page-1/#comment-22 BeeDub Wed, 20 Sep 2006 18:03:31 +0000 http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/#comment-22 "Grasp united front..." United... Could this be a reference to airport security patdowns in inappropriate places? “Grasp united front…”

United…

Could this be a reference to airport security patdowns in inappropriate places?

]]> By: Binky http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/comment-page-1/#comment-17 Binky Wed, 20 Sep 2006 16:06:45 +0000 http://www.ericdsnider.com/blog/2006/09/19/bad-9-11-poetry-untitled-and-declared-tumble/#comment-17 So, so haunting... I know that when tumbling towers freeze MY mind, a short lie-down usually puts me right as rain! So, so haunting…

I know that when tumbling towers freeze MY mind, a short lie-down usually puts me right as rain!

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